Monday, July 9, 2012

Growing Up...... Comments

Rating: 3.8

At what point is the optimism of youth
Replaced by the absolute truth?
No longer relish a brand new day
Pessimism douses the glee ofay!
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karen sinclair
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Heyyou Boy 21 October 2012

Expressed very well, words of a true poet. nice work Karen

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Hmmm... Good technical poem, ... Nice work., .... Didnt know where d poem was heading till i got to d end

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