Friday, June 3, 2022

Growing Up Comments

Rating: 5.0

Growing up meant
Every day you lost some illusions
Every day you discovered a new statistic.
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Nosheen Irfan
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Richard Wlodarski 04 June 2022

A stunningly honest, and so beautiful, portrayal of lost innocence into stark reality. Thoroughly enjoyed this amazing poem, Nosheen! Highest marks!

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M. Asim Nehal 04 June 2022

Fantasy of childhood slowly and gradually fades as we grow and start to separate realities from fables. Full ****

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3) in the process of growing up, we lose our innocence. We gather "knowledge" that play havoc with our lives, our existence. Nosheen, beautiful poem. Thank You for being back

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Nosheen Irfan 04 June 2022

Thank you Sir. God bless you!

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2) " the unripe brain made sure We won't know the world In all its nakedness." the pitfalls of life and its agonies remain alien to our little world of fantasies.

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Exquisite poetry. Ignorance of childhood is blissful. And takes one to all fantastic worlds easily. Nothing prevents you from imagining new. Continue…

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Nosheen Irfan

Nosheen Irfan

Lahore, Pakistan
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