Friday, March 2, 2018

Growing Up Comments

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Let us not talk
About the heartaches
The heartbreaks
The wounds and the scars
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Ruta Mohapatra
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Nk Dash 30 January 2022

Forgetting and forgiving make real life.Beautiful.

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Bri Edwards 29 August 2018

(cont.) There is a 'saying': learn from one's mistakes. so it may not be always a good thing to bury past heartaches et al completely; i mean to not think or talk of them. to MyPoemList. bri ;)

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Bri Edwards 29 August 2018

well, i like the poem, but i would give it a different slant, so to speak. i believe the items mentioned in both stanzas can help to make one 'what they are', the 'heartbreaks' AND the 'healings', AND talking about either may be helpful at times. but not to EXCESS! (cont.)

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Chris Embrick 02 March 2018

A great write. Wonderful truth for all. Thank you dear Ruts.

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Wonderful writing Ruta Thank you for sharing Mario Odekerken

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