Saturday, October 17, 2009

Growing To Perfection (To Lucy) Comments

Rating: 5.0

(Inspired by my daughter when she was 6 years old - a while ago)

Everything you say and do: -
A glimpse into the heart of you,
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Neil Godden
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James Gaskin 03 July 2016

Straight from the heart!

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Ramesh Rai 27 July 2012

In my previous comment, I had mistaken which I confess. After all it is a provoking poem with good wishes. I pray the Almighty for perfection to Lucky. May God bless her with all perfection.

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Sally Plumb Plumb 27 January 2012

loved the last six lines.

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Wahab Abdul 11 January 2012

its love like a pure gold....very good line....i like the poem for its nice words and water like flow...i enjoyed it fully...10...please read my two new poems

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Budlea Ní Mhaolfhábhail 18 October 2009

A lovely poem, beautifully written and may God bless your little (even if she has grown to perfection) daughter.....10

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