Saturday, October 31, 2009

Growing Pains Comments

Rating: 5.0

I am worthy.
I was born to my position of sacrifice.
I was broken down in childhood to open myself to spiritual guidance.
It has never been about me, but rather what I could do.
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Mohamed El-hallag 05 November 2009

i really liked this poem.. very effective, , , emotional... great.. keep up the good work

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Trenton Watson 01 November 2009

This is very... well i do say myself expermental. Yes an excellent for ur only poem! WRITE MORE ^_^

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Dr.subhendu Kar 31 October 2009

My heart is not wounded enough to take in all that I can. My heart is still not receptive to love. My soul still aches for what is not mine to have, yet. My head still screams for what I should have......................introspective, evocatively ingenious, wonderful portray of art of life by belief,10+++, thanks forsharing

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