(growing Pains) 5.At The Pond Comments

I am fond of short forms of expression and maybe that is why i prefer this concise version of the poem and especially the joyful mood of its first stanza. I wonder what would it look like if you paint it? It would be wonderful in your favorite colors. I already imagine...

Nice imagery using few crispy lines...an abstract message painted along with a colorful image...good piece, Janice 10