Saturday, September 20, 2008

(growing Pains) 3. Dog-Eat-Dog (First Day At The Toddler Group) Comments

Rating: 2.8

You are confident
in your babywalker
gliding like a ballroom dancer
among the toddling two-year-olds.
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Janice Windle
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Susan Jarvis 12 July 2009

'You are confident/ in your babywalker/ gliding like a ballroom dancer...' this superb image is so real it's tangible, as is the pain and emotion 'of human contact/ in a dog-eat-dog world.' You have managed to transform the first harsh brush with reality into a beautiful poem. S :)

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