Growing Pains Comments

Nice piece well express, no condition is permanent. Weeping may last for a night, but joy cometh in the morning. At last she got fulfill

it is nice to know that though she had lived in pain as a child, she finally found happiness as a woman and may she continuously live with it till she runs out of breath salute

i understand the angst in your poem. without being to critical i think the first stanza could use a little line rearrangement with the breaks. and the second stanza's over use of the word 'pain'. other then that i like the concept of finding your happy place in life again.

I think you expressed yourself and your` thoughts very well and I could feel for the person and sense the situation. Well Done

Lovely reminiscence well presented poetically