Friday, March 21, 2014

Growing Cold Comments

Rating: 5.0

We living in this fast moving world
With some people wicked and bold
There must be a need to slow down
If not our wits could simply drown
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Clarence Prince
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Bri Edwards 16 May 2016

Missing word in 1st line? Fame and gold has nothing to do with my loss of faith. I have no gold, and my fame on Poem Hunter does not count. But this poem may resonate with some. Good try! ! Bri :)

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Bri Edwards 16 May 2016

Missing word in 1st line? _

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Gladys Brown Prince 28 March 2014

It comes a day when neither of the two, fame nor gold, will save or be of use to anyone. Yet God will always there....

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Gajanan Mishra 21 March 2014

love for God, I like it, thanks.

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