Tuesday, March 3, 2015

Growing Comments

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The world is coeval with me.
When I was young it was young;
There was a needless lilt
In the tilt of a butterfly.
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Ananta Madhavan
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Impressive work, indeed...The last 2 lines rhyme scheme works very well, as does your virtual flawless structural movement throughout...An obviously polished bard of the Silent Word you be....Will be back for more...Cheers ~FjR~

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