Grow Wings Comments

you can with deep feelings inside to make you rise within and you will feel good like the overjoyed winds.

there is no freedom sweeter than that of a bird hey...u painted ur feelings abt the pains of life and ur envy of the freedom of a bird so well..well done. word

I was birthed into a place filled with thickened thorns. So as I struggle to break free from broken hearts, cruelness, and pain........... excellent thought in desire agains this wild world of dismay, pain still haunts the heart by cruelty, humanistic and evocative too, by imagery,10+, thanks for sharing

Although I understand the sentiment of your words, I think you must see that even birds have pain, and find obstacles they must overcome, Your words are clearly descriptive and well chosen, I feel the flow was a bit rough as I read through but I enjoyed your poem very much. thank you for sharing. and keep writing.

Nice poem, we all feel this way 2 sometimes, good write, very sweet

you are on your way to achieving your goal it's a wonder that you'll behold. don't let anything hold you back move forward and attack. you are starting off good. a ten

Grow wings and fly, and fly so high that the world then says that there lives the Muse. CP

a wonderful poem Ashley may I suggest that you meant to use the word 'inhumane' instead of humane? sorry, it's the 'grammar fool' inside me anyway, thanks, keep up the good work, and let me know when another one is posted

I enjoyed this particular poem very much. I love the fact that almost anyone can relate to it- well thats how i feel anyway. Great poem! ! !

You have succeeded to show how much freedom is valued in the poem. good.

Lovely lil piece you have going here. I second you! 10