Tuesday, December 13, 2011

Grow Old With You? Comments

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Grow old with you?
Come on, sit down on my knees
I'll tell you about the butterflies and the bees
Now I am still young forever
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Sylvia Frances Chan
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Timber Koleden 02 June 2025

A very pretty poem of its own! Thank you for sharing!

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Nosheen Irfan 27 January 2023

Wo great! It reminds me of Pablo Neruda. Your style is enchanting!

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Thank you so much that you think that way. Happy to hear and read your words, dear Nosheen!

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Craig Moses Uche 31 December 2021

very sassy and classical all at the same time _ lovely _do consider mine as well though 'Let's Grow Up Together'

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Thank you so much Craig

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Dr Dillip K Swain 12 December 2021

Superb! An amazing poem dear poetess. I love your ink.

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Thank you so much, Dr.Dillip

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Aarzoo Mehek 11 December 2021

Love keeps us young at heart. Loved reading such beautiful expression of emotions you hold in your heart. Much love

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Much love to you, dear Aarzoo. I enjoyed your precious visit and appreciated

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Nabakishore Dash 31 August 2021

Unique poem with beautiful crafting.

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Gratefully yours. I am honoured and uplifted by your special response.

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Gabriel Oluwalana 01 August 2021

This is unique, I will read for my upcoming wife, when we grow old.

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Pleased to hear that, Gabriel. I am helping a home for old people and all of a sudden I became inspired.

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Good to partake from this amazing it is something sweet as honey. your work is so unique and enthralling.

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I feel flattered and honoured, Emmanuel, your response is my greatest support. Thank YOU!

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Lasaad Tayeb 10 July 2021

This is a lovely poetry. Sylvia, they were clearly loyal to you. They show their appreciation for you. A beautiful and insightful poem

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They know me as a helper, but I got inspired by their daily actions and conversations, the old people have their own language and signs as I have observed them. I come only to help them in their daily/weekly doings and got inspired. Thank you for your great support

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M Asim Nehal 10 July 2021

Very fortunate are those who grow old together to share and care things from past and relish in the present. The bonding never grows old, but with time it strengthens. Full ********

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Thank you for your response, Dr. M. Asim Nehal Sir, next to my work as a lecturer for students I am helping old people with their daily/weekly activities, and I got inspired by them

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 13 February 2021

A unique and beautiful poem on love woven by a great Poetess with a beautiful heart and mind.

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I help in the weekends old peoples home and got inspired by their weekly activities and actions. I am flattered and honoured by your fantastic support. Thank YOU, dear Rose Marie

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Kumarmani Mahakul 23 January 2021

Growing old with time we grow old with memory. Revisiting this poem I feel very happy!

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Varsha M 30 December 2020

Love that lasts and yet grows throughout....grows old together.... just touched my heart.

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Varsha M 30 December 2020

This is really beautiful penning of love..

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Thank you dear Varsha, I help in the weekends old peoples home and got inspired by their actions and activities

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bri edwards 23 December 2020

THE NEW PH FORMAT IS DISASTROUS. I THINK CLICKING ON PoemHunter.com, above, will take you to a page to write a complaint.

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Thank you for your advice, dear Bri, but I have no complaints for PoemHunter.Com

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Belle Wassermeister 14 December 2020

A wonderful poem! I can see why it has already received so many glorious comments.

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my gratitude, dear Belle

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Diane Montemayor 10 November 2020

Grow old with you-kindest poem called " love" ...Beautiful

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My gratitude for your great support and comment, Diane

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Shaun Cronick 09 November 2020

A beautiful poem that is timeless and one that will never age. A poem for each and everyone to enjoy and see the truth and hold on to like each other. Five worthy and eternal shining stars. Thank you Sylvia for writing and sharing this graciously well woven and poem of total class. Take care and enjoy life.

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My deepest thanks for your great response and fantastic support. Thank YOU, dear Shaun

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Sylvia Frances Chan 23 September 2020

Thank you so much dear Mr. Hasmukh Sir and dear Dr. Jadia. I am grateful for your kindest support. God's Great Blessings be with thee both

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Sylvia Frances Chan 23 September 2020

Thank you so much dear Respected Master Poet Kumarmani Mahakul Sir! On any moment your constant great support does mean so much to me. I most appreciate that very much. God's Blessings in Abundance be upon you and yiour marvlous épousse.

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