Wednesday, August 10, 2022

Grout Expectations Comments

Rating: 5.0

Grandma's always cleaning her grout
she's not my grandma
and I don't know where she belongs
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Bharati Nayak 20 August 2022

Wow--It took me a while to understand your poem with its underlying humour. Bri's comment also helped me to understand this 'Grout /Great Expectation'.

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M.J. Lemon 23 August 2022

Thanks for reading!

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Bri Edwards 15 August 2022

I pasted two comments about what Duck and Cover is to be used for, but the two comments are not next to each other, below.

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Bri Edwards 15 August 2022

5 stars. : ) bri

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Bri Edwards 15 August 2022

I think you mixing grandma with PSA is an attempt by you at humor, and it worked....after I reread the last six lines. .

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M.J. Lemon 16 August 2022

Thanks, Bri. I think it can be read as either humour or horror.

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Bri Edwards 15 August 2022

A poet's note would have been nice. It's a Great title a la Charles Dickens (1812-1870) . 'PSA' = public service announcement. .

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M.J. Lemon 16 August 2022

But there's no challenege with way too many notes....

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Bri Edwards 15 August 2022

But I'm thinking MJ is refering to TV, where 'he' may have seen 'grandma' in a TV ad for grout cleaner.

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M.J. Lemon 16 August 2022

You are right on....almost. For over a week I kept getting these grout cleaning ads on my social media/internet pages. I must have clicked on something withour realizing. In any case, grout ads, featuring a grandma figure....why? I still ask.

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Bri Edwards 15 August 2022

D & C was a U.S. government film in the early 1950's which I may have seen in grade school or on TV.

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Bri Edwards 15 August 2022

'...outside the radius of the nuclear fireball but still within sufficient range of the nuclear explosion that standing upright and uncovered is likely to cause serious injury or death. '

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M.J. Lemon 16 August 2022

Yes! And right next to grandma I came across a duck and cover PSA...a sign of the times, I think.

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Bri Edwards 15 August 2022

Duck and cover' is a method of personal protection against the effects of a nuclear explosion. Ducking and covering is useful in offering a degree of protection to personnel located ' ...

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Smoky Hoss 13 August 2022

Granny cleaning grout, a simple trick, until she gets the gout, and then she's simply sick.

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M.J. Lemon 16 August 2022

Now that is poetry. Thanks, Smoky!

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Kim Barney 10 August 2022

You elicited a chuckle and five stars from me, MJ. Thank you!

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M.J. Lemon 16 August 2022

Thank you so much, Kim!

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Richard Wlodarski 10 August 2022

Well, M.J, you've started my day off to a great start. This poem is absolutely enjoyable sarcasm at its very best! And even grandma would a positive say in that. Keep them coming, my friend!

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M.J. Lemon 16 August 2022

So much appreciated. Thanks, Richard!

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