Saturday, January 12, 2008

Groundkeeping Comments

Rating: 5.0

weeds were growing everywhere in disgrace
dusting away the dead grass, and pulling out the
unattended weeds, the tears started to flow
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Bonnie Collins
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Bob Gibson 21 August 2009

Your Dad, may have had, a favorite flower he planted his dedicated love, in each flower -- enchanted! He kissed your heart with every bloom! , but one was given to you perfection through your daddy's eyes, this one was meant for you!

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David Threadgold 25 September 2008

Hi Bonnie. A very touching piece written from the heart. Well done and thanks for sharing this one with us. Regards Dave T

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Tracker Ogryphon 24 February 2008

A fantastic poem of Deliverence and words. Thanks Tracker

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Craig Anderson 07 February 2008

I can certainly relate to this simple yet powerful piece. A pleasure to read Bonnie. Craig.

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Alison Cassidy 26 January 2008

It is the trivial seemingly unimportant things that touch the deepest cord. A beautiful poem of grief and the loss of one who matters. Gently penned. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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John Nightingale 16 January 2008

I think this is a very moving poem. When my father passed away, each of the four children purchased a small tree to remember him by. It helps a little. Thanks

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Bonnie Collins

Bonnie Collins

Middletown New York
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