Wednesday, February 1, 2006

Groundhog Comments

Rating: 4.7

A zooming, barreling
noisy thinking contraption
My attention
driving the scenic route
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Tara Crown
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Linda Hepner 16 February 2006

Your last lines really spoke to me! Linda

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Scarlett Treat 14 February 2006

I thought he was Road Kill for sure. Poor baby! But isn't that just like real life - when we least expect it, a 18 wheeler comes. Well drawn picture.

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William Jackson 08 February 2006

Good poem. It must be terrifying for small animals to attempt to cross a busy road or highway, especially at night with the headlights coming and the weird vibration. I am sure such an experience is completely unnatural for the small creatures that live in synchronous rhythm with the earth and the one life that animates all living things.

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