Friday, February 2, 2018

Groundhog Comments

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M.J. Lemon
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Kumarmani Mahakul 26 November 2018

You have beautifully introduced a type of squirrel basing upon your natural perception. This poem is very interestingly and excellently penned...10

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Mj Lemon 27 November 2018

Thank you so much, Kumarmani. This particular squirrel was just right for this purpose.

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Bri Edwards 23 November 2018

(CONT.) B - to MyPoemList. i think a mixture of haiku and senryu., also known as a 'human haiku'. grook? A grook (gruk in Danish) is a form of short aphoristic poem or rhyming aphorism ..whatever an aphorism is! ! bri (: p.s. nut ...U.S. slang for crazy or foolish

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Mj Lemon 25 November 2018

And so much more slang does come to mind! Thank you so much, Bri. We are fellow champions of the lowly (misunderstood?) groundhog. I do like your observation about the 'human haiku.'

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Bri Edwards 23 November 2018

A - how WEIRD IS THIS? ? ? ! ! ! I JUST SENT you a message mentioning Groudhog Day, in response to your Thanksgiving wish, and.....NOW....i see this poem title! ! ! ! i would have been drawn to Groundhog title anyway, but am even more so now! ! Groundhogs (Marmota monax) are a type of rodent known as a marmot, and marmots are closely related to squirrels. (CONT.)

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Nika Mcguin 27 April 2018

I can't blame the poor creature lol. Humans can be more beastly than beasts themselves sometimes. A great punch of humor here! ~

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Mj Lemon 27 April 2018

Thanks so much. I agree about how beastly we can be....I often wonder if that nature can be muted or tempered with humour?

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Loke Kok Yee 29 March 2018

Three lines to start the day, it is surely going to be a great day, thanks for the laugh'

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Mj Lemon 29 March 2018

So good to hear I could get your day off to a good start. Thanks so much, Loke.

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Unwritten Soul 03 February 2018

Is it Groundhog has a special day? really but the writing hahahahaha you are hilarious and funny... well i need a mirror to see if i am a grounhog look a like, well i guess i am a kitten not a type of squirrel haha

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Mj Lemon 03 February 2018

Thank you so much, Soul. I was hoping to generate some good humour. And yes, Groundhog Day Does exist. The date is 2 February. I once had someone argue it was actually a 'sacred' day. On that point, I am uncertain.

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Judith Blatherwick 02 February 2018

Good humour and use of double meaning. Until this morning I didn't believe that groundout Day was real. I believed it was only from the movie until The Crow educated me.

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Mj Lemon 02 February 2018

Thank you so much, Judith. And it is indeed a very, very real thing. Without it, Bill Murray's best film may not even have been possible.

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