Sunday, May 29, 2005

Groundhog Comments

Rating: 2.8

The mist was thick and hung
a giant lacy drape across the meadow,
a lonely bee, to young to have yet stung,
resting to see about the famous shadow
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Herbert Nehrlich
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Mary Nagy 30 May 2005

Very cute poem. Great images. Sincerely, Mary

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Allan James Saywell 30 May 2005

a lunchtime well spent herbert this is a good poem, with great flow and composition even the rat pack will like this one Warm regards allan

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