Friday, November 30, 2018

Grounded Comments

Rating: 4.3

Grounded

The water ripples gently, the trees, reflected with perfection,
I wonder how and why, my life, ever landed amidst this intersection,
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Nell Sheridan
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Carl Roussell 11 December 2018

Well chosen Poem of the day - congratulations.

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Nell Sheridan 04 January 2019

Thank you. You time to read and comment is appreciated.

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Lyn Paul 11 December 2018

Heartfelt words and may your pen assist you in healing and inspiring others.

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Nell Sheridan 04 January 2019

A beautiful comment many thanks.

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Edward Kofi Louis 11 December 2018

Gypsy heart! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Nell Sheridan 04 January 2019

Yes I have long suffered a gypsy heart which the world rarely understands. Thank you

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Sarah Persson 11 December 2018

A beautiful poem Neil. The loss of freedom and the sanity of reality lost is detriment. Congratulations on poem of the day, very much deserved.

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Nell Sheridan 04 January 2019

Thank you so much your comment is gladly received.

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The yearning to be free but bounded by conventional rules so hard for the spirit and mind.. to be torn in two..Please read my poem Song To A Drifter if you have time..

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Nell Sheridan 04 January 2019

Freedom will revisit me one day. Thank you kindly for the comment

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Kumarmani Mahakul 11 December 2018

One day, freedom, will pulse back through her veins, Until then, firmly still, this shackled gypsy silently remains.....impressive expression. Beatiful poem. Thanks and congratulatoin for being selected this poem as the poem of the day.

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Nell Sheridan 04 January 2019

I am so glad you enjoyed the expression. Thank you for your kind words

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Anil Kumar Panda 11 December 2018

A very nice poem on the loss of feeling free in this world. 'Escape reality, momentarily, recollect the beauty remaniss uponmagic expired, Calm yourself, gypsy heart, now only your mind will traverse those places desired, '...is such nice lines. Enjoyed.

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Nell Sheridan 04 January 2019

That would be my favourite part also. Thank you

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Alufa Oke Joshua 11 December 2018

One day, freedom, will pulse back through her veins... Thanks for sharing this unique pieces of writing

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Nell Sheridan 04 January 2019

Such a lovely compliment thank you. Unique writing is rare these days.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 11 December 2018

Nell, such a well crafted poem of the day. Congrats for being picked....10++++++++++++

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Nell Sheridan 04 January 2019

Thank you. Your comments and ratings are great fully received.

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Carl Roussell 03 December 2018

Loss of freedom is hard to accept - but imagination may sustain till the day comes again. A really good poem -a 10

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Nell Sheridan 04 January 2019

Many thanks so glad you liked this write.

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