Thursday, December 8, 2005

Ground Zero Comments

Rating: 4.7

Who was the man who sat last night
at the table next to ours,
trying to impress, but quite
as fallen as Trade Center Towers?
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gershon hepner
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Joseph Daly 08 December 2005

I agree with Stuart. What is more, you sum up a very sad human condition in which we take on another persona in order to impress. Do we all think of ourselves as great actors? Great work Gerson. Denis Joe

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Stuart Mason 08 December 2005

Brilliant command of the rhyme throughout. You managed to capture meaning and ryhme without forsaking either. Excellent exteneded imagery too.

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