Once concealed by the deep forest,
the path has been hidden in the dark
In to that depth suddenly a voice cried out,
'don't you recognize me',
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As I was reading your poem, I was pictureing the poem, and I found it very impressing, good job
I love the lines where you wonder at her new perfect form.Thought provoking poem.
Interesting. Intelligently narrative. But if I were you, Vivek, I would repaint it and add more flavour.
hi! i am simran arora THERE ARE NO STRANGER............ ONLY FRIENDS WE HAVE'NT MEAT. I LIKE YOUR POEM, KEEP GLOOMING. PLZ READ MY POEM, S
A lovley love poem, thoughts and emotions add its beauty...well written..10 for your poem
Wow, Now this is what suppose to be called a true poem. Well Written(:
That is such a beautiful poem. Wonderful imagery. And very unique. Different than most of the love poems I have read. I enjoyed it very much. Two thumbs way up!
well written poem on the endless journey of love... enjoyed reading it!
Awww this is sweetest poem I ever read. I enjoy it. Imagery I can picture it. Emotions and thoughts you put in this poem is good.10+++
Vivek! An outstanding write. keep writing.