Thursday, September 8, 2011

Groom Of My Conscience Comments

Rating: 4.7

Once concealed by the deep forest,
the path has been hidden in the dark
In to that depth suddenly a voice cried out,
'don't you recognize me',
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Vivek Haldar
COMMENTS
Ramesh Rai 30 September 2013

Vivek! An outstanding write. keep writing.

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Marcella D 22 September 2011

As I was reading your poem, I was pictureing the poem, and I found it very impressing, good job

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Matt Mooney 21 September 2011

I love the lines where you wonder at her new perfect form.Thought provoking poem.

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Kufre Udeme 21 September 2011

Interesting. Intelligently narrative. But if I were you, Vivek, I would repaint it and add more flavour.

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Izuoma Ibe 20 September 2011

very dramatic with a simple and straight plot. Thanks!

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Simran Arora 13 September 2011

hi! i am simran arora THERE ARE NO STRANGER............ ONLY FRIENDS WE HAVE'NT MEAT. I LIKE YOUR POEM, KEEP GLOOMING. PLZ READ MY POEM, S

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Vipins Puthooran 13 September 2011

A lovley love poem, thoughts and emotions add its beauty...well written..10 for your poem

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Marlene Rashidi 10 September 2011

Wow, Now this is what suppose to be called a true poem. Well Written(:

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Ms. Queenie 10 September 2011

That is such a beautiful poem. Wonderful imagery. And very unique. Different than most of the love poems I have read. I enjoyed it very much. Two thumbs way up!

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Eric Cockrell 10 September 2011

well written poem on the endless journey of love... enjoyed reading it!

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Christina Phan 08 September 2011

Awww this is sweetest poem I ever read. I enjoy it. Imagery I can picture it. Emotions and thoughts you put in this poem is good.10+++

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