Monday, November 28, 2005

Grip Comments

Rating: 5.0

Tick tock the pendulum churns,
mocking the monotony -
which remains a secret to the one I yearn.
Or pretend to yearn for, as I play house.
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Jennifer Strubel
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Seán O' Muiriosa 28 November 2005

Brilliant Jennifer, I love the last line, it brings great closure, 'I have me, and you have not. ' Best wishes, Seán

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