his scythe dripping blood
the Grim Reaper has stepped
right out of my dreams
And you are a celebrated poet, as you claim? Hard to believe, laughable really … Try writing in your own language, pleases.
Well, you are not Japanese, are you, cannot speak Japanese, and you try to write these haiku in English? In sum, not good at all …
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Yes, please write in your own language, and save yourself from such embarrassing performances writing haiku in English!