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Why is it that I always sacrifice I ask God in grave demise .. Hello Gul Naz Indeed a nice short poem..really a lovely poem...10+ .

nice short poem it's intertaning

in the evolution of life that's the part with your verses...be yourself and be determined....well expressed poem... (read my poem Be Yourself)

life is like that.but you please continue being yourself. a day will come when your cup will be full voted10 surya

In the journey of life I met so many characters They were different and distinctive They had wis........., , , , , whole world is such where relations are based of filmsy grounds....nothig be done... read mine .. home bound.... divorce and dreamland

A grim outlook of life but as you have said ' Life is another name of compromise'....

but I would... ask for more such works...