Tuesday, June 30, 2009

Grim Comments

Rating: 5.0

When lips smile and heart cries
World seems to be full of lies
Hateful words in loves guise
Dawn brings no cheery surprise
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Ramin Chaman 19 December 2009

Why is it that I always sacrifice I ask God in grave demise .. Hello Gul Naz Indeed a nice short poem..really a lovely poem...10+ .

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Marcella D 15 July 2009

nice short poem it's intertaning

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Ency Bearis 15 July 2009

in the evolution of life that's the part with your verses...be yourself and be determined....well expressed poem... (read my poem Be Yourself)

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Surya . 14 July 2009

life is like that.but you please continue being yourself. a day will come when your cup will be full voted10 surya

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In the journey of life I met so many characters They were different and distinctive They had wis........., , , , , whole world is such where relations are based of filmsy grounds....nothig be done... read mine .. home bound.... divorce and dreamland

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 05 July 2009

A grim outlook of life but as you have said ' Life is another name of compromise'....

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Aamnah Akhtar 05 July 2009

but I would... ask for more such works...

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