Friday, November 7, 2014

Grieve Not When I Am Gone. Comments

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Grieve not when I am gone
Since that is the way life is prone;
A day, a month, a year or ten
Cast of time is beyond our ken.
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Om Chawla
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Valsa George 12 November 2014

Failures didn't deter us nor embitter. Resetting our goals we pushed along And so at this juncture of parting Let not regret creep in at all. A very practical way of looking at life, accepting failures and victories as part of life and death an inescapable reality! I feel this is the musing of a contented soul! Greatly enjoyed this poem as I enjoy your other writes!

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Dinesan Madathil 08 November 2014

This is the second death poem I am reading today and yesterday a lady living opposite my house died quite unexpectedly.... I draw a sketch of disapproval for your write of philosophical over tunes as we have to know that apprehensions of whatsoever shades have nothing to do with longevity sir. From your profile picture I assume you are healthier now than ever before. The pangs of birth and death are sweet pains. But unfortunately all our intelligent presumptions have nothing to do with the solace of glorification of life thriving within the human body alone. We too join the mud with a different tale to tell prior to that act. Anyways sir, your insight has helped you to write a beautiful poem irrespective of the theme. I foresee another decade of OmChawlaji being with us on the PH.

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