Saturday, October 12, 2013

Grieve Not Comments

Rating: 5.0

You bemoan;

Dry dust rises behind you as you walk
The ground lies parched like fossilized thoughts
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Valsa George
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Akhtar Jawad 21 November 2014

Beautiful and well-dressed in the colors of rainbows, a great thoughtful poem..........10

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 06 November 2014

Simply phenomenal write with very inspiring words.....Valsa.......great piece with great message......10/10

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Ibnu Din Assingkiri 18 October 2013

well structured. a dialogue-like poem, long but never ran away from the main idea. I salute you for this poem.10

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Hans Vr 15 October 2013

Brilliant poem full of hope. Very well written.

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Tribhawan Kaul 14 October 2013

Human nature has always been complex. It sees more negativity than positivity. However, the poet in you could not bear such negative aspects in a human being and so you bring sunshine through your inspiring last stanza. A beautiful poem penned.10/10

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Danny Draper 14 October 2013

Hope lies a dormant bud or bud primordia and yet we are at ease snugly grimacing in our well worn frets and yet perfectly this poem assures and reassures our place on this most beautiful and unlikely life giving sphere a haven a sanctuary, a paradise where life persists and should be celebrated and cherished instead of feared and held in contempt. We are here by chance and should every day feel special and very lucky indeed. A beautiful and erudite piece graciously crafted to celebrate and elucidate our great fortune.

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Tajudeen Shah 13 October 2013

A wonderful reminder. A must-to-educate collection of maxims. I must squeeze them and feed my students too. Still feel the vibe of inspiration, a peculiar sort of resounding, even the lilt is very conspicuous. God Bless.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 13 October 2013

But the phoenix shall triumphantly rise From the pile of ashen dreams A poem of hope so beautifully presented. All the five areas of concern are addressed and summarized. Thank you for this motivational masterpiece.

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Nasarudheen Parameswaran 13 October 2013

A very beautifully knit positive poem.I like it much.

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 13 October 2013

beautiful and inspiring poem, Valsa.

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Dinesan Madathil 12 October 2013

A few perceptions of life with an appeal to keep calm at times of inevitable adversities. Madam Valsa, you have spoken here like a seer and philosopher.

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Laurie X3 12 October 2013

A very uplifting poems! !

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Heather Wilkins 12 October 2013

this poem ends in hope for the future. without hope there is no future great write

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Kanniappan Kanniappan 12 October 2013

The method of presenting every poem is so good. You give a problem, a solace (So grieve not!) and finally solution. Wonderful.

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Dave Walker 12 October 2013

We all think the worst most of the time, but nature just comes and goes. No matter how bad things get, if it came it means it can go. A great poem.

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Lyn Paul 12 October 2013

These words are set out beautifully. After the pain you have displayed hope. So well done. Thank You

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Yasmin Khan 12 October 2013

Every clouds a silver lining and dawn's blush smiles through dark horizon, in your poem optimism and hope shine through a crack and raindrops trickle on parched land...a delightful poem

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