It was raining all the way
Spring of life was its charm
Rejuvenation was its pool
Though flood was it's bewail
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Beautiful poem Salini. I really feel we should have Grievance box in which we can put all our unfulfilled desire. In this case one box wont be enough, and we will be standing in a queue to put our grievances. Very true said, in few lines..... It's the thirst of human mind Fulfillment a far dream Plea that revolves round his thoughts Change that push him to change! ! ! ! One fact is true our desires are never going to be fulfilled any time. If any time anything gets fulfilled unexpectedly one should never forget to tell our dreams got fulfilled...... I loved the way you presented this topic.
Man proposes and God disposes.......since birth to the last breath we have only grievances and the favours that have been blessed are hardly remembered and hence we don't see our desires fulfilled at all.......... very well composed
fulfillment is a far dream for human being....each time some desire controls his thoughts! ! !
Every one keeps the said box, It is haunting like a ghost in mind, poetess SALINI imagination is the reality and nicely she put in the poetry form...love this poem brilliant write