Sunday, June 23, 2013

Grief V Comments

Rating: 4.7

Potters used the wheel
And made the lovely pot
The greatest invention of past
Still we are wheeling
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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 24 June 2013

Life goes round and round. Hope it is not all grief. Thank you.

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David Wood 24 June 2013

A very profound poem. We are all but clay pots moulded by the supreme potter.

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Gajanan Mishra 24 June 2013

greatest invention of time, thanks.

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Heather Wilkins 23 June 2013

humanity is moving in a circular but should take a look at the past and not repeat mistake, excellent

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Sallam Yassin 23 June 2013

the aim is- no to make the mistakes of past but still we are doing the same well done bro be blessed

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 23 June 2013

A great philosophical poem in brevity.!

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Wahab Abdul 23 June 2013

fantastic, this short poem has wider significance.. humanity is moving in a circular path....

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