Tuesday, February 1, 2022

Grief Shrouds Comments

Rating: 5.0

Grief shrouds my soul, breaking the heart asunder
Allowing tears to blind and depression to reign
With no more sun or moon but overwhelming darkness
And joy and happiness lost within a fierce battering storm.
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Colin Ian Jeffery
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Doris Cornago 01 February 2022

Such is the folly if waiting. I am grieving for you and eith you. 😔

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Unnikrishnan E S 01 February 2022

"kneeling at your graveside I weep", I do not know what to state…. The reader's heart sinks in an inconsolable grief

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Unnikrishnan E S 01 February 2022

A wonderful elegy for the departed soul, the dearest one… The mood of the poem is such grave sadness, that it rubs on the soul of the reader too. Top score

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Colin Ian Jeffery

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