Wednesday, August 21, 2013

Grief And Melancholy Comments

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Grief: A black dense cloud over head
It rains within, through eyes, fade

Melancholy: A silver lining cloud
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Geetha Jayakumar 22 August 2013

Very Beautiful poem..on grief.....very well expressed... Loved reading it. Thank you the lovely comments for my poem Breaking news...thanks.

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Gerry Legister 21 August 2013

nice poem it makes me look as it rises and falls

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Wahab Abdul 21 August 2013

very good, i enjoyed it..nice take on grief and melancholy

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