Sunday, August 21, 2005

Grief Comments

Rating: 4.5

He spoke to her two days before he died
in the haunted room, now forever dark,
and told her of a dream that had replied
to the grief of their son's death by stark
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Philip Record 22 September 2005

Great poetry touches a seventh sense inside me-and I can bathe in it's alchemy all day long! ! I am familiar with the subject matter- your definition was on the money! In fact, your aim with vocabulary is wonderfully and dreadfully accurate! ! Would you suggest some of your work which you, yourself are most fond of?

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Amberlee Carter 31 August 2005

I really love this piece...well done

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