Thursday, June 4, 2009

Grief Comments

Rating: 5.0

grief struck me like a lightning bolt
the anguish thundered in my gut, tasting the
sting of it's acid decimating my throat
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chloe young
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Claude H Oliver Ii 04 September 2009

An eloquent statement of addressing grief.

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Kobik William 29 July 2009

simply great, honest.thanks 4 lookin at my poems

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Travis Lepine 18 June 2009

Your poetry honestly spoke to me (especially this poem) . I found when you write it can deliver different messages which I find defines a true poet. Thank you for commenting on my poetry.. I've been trying endlessly to publish some of it. Anyways, you write very well. Keep on writing and I will keep on reading. -travis

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Sameer Ahmed 06 June 2009

A deep and intensified melancholy with some heartfelt emotins has been drawn in this poem that one would surely realize the importance of true adoration after reading it...10/10

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Eric Lopez 05 June 2009

A bit twisted, but cool I like it..

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