grief struck me like a lightning bolt
the anguish thundered in my gut, tasting the
sting of it's acid decimating my throat
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Your poetry honestly spoke to me (especially this poem) . I found when you write it can deliver different messages which I find defines a true poet. Thank you for commenting on my poetry.. I've been trying endlessly to publish some of it. Anyways, you write very well. Keep on writing and I will keep on reading. -travis
A deep and intensified melancholy with some heartfelt emotins has been drawn in this poem that one would surely realize the importance of true adoration after reading it...10/10
An eloquent statement of addressing grief.