Grief,
the resounding echo
to one’s new reality.
Existing in time,
...
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Grief marvelously defined in different of it's hues and origins. Heartiest Congrats for it's POD too.
The expression is just amazing. One doesn't mind the recurring sound of a few words in view of their emotional impact. Thanks a lot and Congrats on your being the Poet Of The Day today.
Thanks Rajnish I wrote it a long time ago I can't write much as I am in the middle of the earthquake. Not easy Susan Nelson NZ
Yeah, every one has to experience it at sometimes in life. Seems you too have gone through much. Nicely penned.
Thanks Anil I wrote it a long time ago I can't write much as I am in the middle of the earthquake. Not easy Susan Nelson NZ
Grief, Existing in time! And, hard to rid of it! That's grief!
Thanks ClarenceI wrote it a long time ago I can't write much as I am in the middle of the earthquake. Not easy Susan Nelson NZ
The resounding echo! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
Thanks Edward I wrote it a long time ago I can't write much as I am in the middle of the earthquake. Not easy Susan Nelson NZ
Congratulations...well studied grief well presented in your words.. thank you Susan
Thanks Indira I wrote it a long time ago I can't write much as I am in the middle of the earthquake. Not easy Susan Nelson NZ
Beautifully expressed feelings of pain Susan Congrats for being selected for the day. Col Muhammad Khalid Khan
Thanks Muhamad I wrote it a long time ago I can't write much as I am in the middle of the earthquake. Not easy Susan Nelson NZ
Grief, the resounding echo tolerating days, Existing in time without part of one’s heart; the mistake for which one pays. Congrats for being selected for the day... Thanks for sharing...
Thanks Bernard I wrote it a long time ago I can't write much as I am in the middle of the earthquake. Not easy Susan Nelson NZ
Beautifully expressed feelings of pain that so many fall victim to throughout life.
Thanks Lyn I wrote it a long time ago I can't write much as I am in the middle of the earthquake. Not easy Susan Nelson NZ
Congratulations on poem of the day! Thank goodness grief is not a big part of my life, so it's hard for me to relate, but the poem is well done!
Thanks KimI wrote it a long time ago I can't write much as I am in the middle of the earthquake. Not easy Susan Nelson NZ
Susan, this poem was perfect and brought me to tears unlike others on Poemhunter. I’m going to read it at my sister’s celebration of life. It is true, one does pay for caring. Thank you.