Friday, November 16, 2018

Grey Yearning Comments

Rating: 5.0

Lamp oil has been
finished

Ink of quills has been
...
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MAHTAB BANGALEE
COMMENTS
Edward Kofi Louis 30 June 2020

Aging! ! Black and grey! Musing along with life. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Practicing Poetess 16 November 2018

He does not want to be separated from his poems. But his poems will live on, long after he has gone. Creatively composed, and beautifully written!

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Bernard F. Asuncion 16 November 2018

Mahtab, such a well executed poetic write...................

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Ravinder Soni 16 November 2018

What a grave picture of mental loneliness you have painted, my friend.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 16 November 2018

When lamp oil is finished at that time white paper turns black or grey. This poem carries amazing poetic expression. An excellent poem is well penned.10

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