Grey Yearning Poem by MAHTAB BANGALEE

Grey Yearning

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Lamp oil has been
finished

Ink of quills has been
finished

White papers have become
black and grey

The bin has been
filled up with
torn writings papers

Writing table and chair
have been attacked
by weevils

Four lonely wall's plaster
has been covered
by moss

Undertakers has come
The old writer's body
has laid on deserted floor
this body, as if, says

"O bier bearer!
please stop your walking

O Necropolis!
Wait a while

Let me bring my phoenix soul- the grey haired writings! "



-November 16,2018 Chattogram

Friday, November 16, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: poetic expression,writings,afterlife,grief ,old age
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
From my comment on "Ashes Of His" poem by Majid Gaggi (Member of poemhunter.com)
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edward Kofi Louis 30 June 2020

Aging! ! Black and grey! Musing along with life. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Practicing Poetess 16 November 2018

He does not want to be separated from his poems. But his poems will live on, long after he has gone. Creatively composed, and beautifully written!

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Bernard F. Asuncion 16 November 2018

Mahtab, such a well executed poetic write...................

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Ravinder Soni 16 November 2018

What a grave picture of mental loneliness you have painted, my friend.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 16 November 2018

When lamp oil is finished at that time white paper turns black or grey. This poem carries amazing poetic expression. An excellent poem is well penned.10

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