Monday, July 24, 2017

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This emptiness that you feel inside your soul
The abstract you had, feels in pieces from it's whole

World's gone upside down and things are mould
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Nayyab Younas Khan
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Konab Ghumman 26 April 2019

what a great poem stay motivated.

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Natalie Salazar 16 April 2018

That is so true, I loved it.

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Nosheen Irfan 21 August 2017

Life is hard at times but hope can flower anywhere. Faith n belief help us get through life's challenges. A meaningful write full of positiveness. Wisely penned.

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Akhtar Jawad 20 August 2017

A poem of wisdom, it has a nice universal message.

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Dr Antony Theodore 29 July 2017

This emptiness; The abstract You're gone mystified It's peace that you seek in your still life Call Him, He will respond to your voice of sorrow You will be healed, nurtured A great message of hope. You proclaim your faith in the ‚Almighty in the midst of emptiness and pain and sorrow and helplessness in the course of the events in the present world. Very nice poem of hope. Liked it very much. You are so young. Always write and express yourself.. God bless you in your work. tony

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Jazib Kamalvi 28 July 2017

A great start with a nice poem, Nayyab. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

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