Grey Mournings Comments

3rd stanza is my fav part. To me it really encapsulates the point of the poem. Also the beginning is great. The way each line adds to your understanding sucks you right in! ! ! Descriptions are good throughout (morning tranquility, murky lakes) and I like the phrase 'nostalgic antiquity'- adds a touch of eloquence.

This was great! My favorite line was: You are neutral without a doubt You go with everything This is one thing we usually love about the color grey, yet you bring out so well that its not always a good thing. Loved this poem great write! ! !

I love the feeling it gives, one of a tired anger. Profound and as always. beautiful imagery. Definitely one of my favourites

Nice job! I love the the last two stanzas. but these are my favorite two lines You are cautious of standing out Of the consequences courage brings Fabulous!