Tuesday, February 7, 2006

Grey Dog Of Despair Comments

Rating: 4.5

Death? I don't know what it is.
But this I know - that death
Is twice as deep with despair.
I am frightened of the Grey Dog whose eyes
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Phillip Sawatzky 26 February 2006

Dear Tan-I keep reading your poems, and I find a soul that has launched himself into the deep where I find my refuge. Thank you. This poem I liken to my own experience of what I call Black Dog Fits-where I get so low that all that I'm feeling consumes me. Keep in touch. Phillip

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Shannon Chapel 11 February 2006

I agree with William. You are too good to NOT be writing, Tan. You know, all you are is out of practice. I promise, the more you write the easier it will become. Shannon

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Philippa Lane 08 February 2006

I think this is an utterly brilliant poem. It is quite exceptional and I love the concept of death with fear portrayed here.

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