Friday, June 9, 2006

Grey Clouds Comments

Rating: 5.0

Grey clouds drift diagonal
In the lavish morning sky

Or perhaps some industrial plant
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Frank Bana
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Ruby Root 17 September 2006

Hi Frank, Excellent write, sounds like your a little down. I don't know maybe I am wrong. Your last line took me off guard I guess. It just seems sad. Take care Frank.

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Dee Daffodil 09 June 2006

Awesome poem with a really important message! ! excellent work! Hugs, Dee

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John Tiong Chunghoo 09 June 2006

reminds me of a poem somewhere i read by one great poet either sylvia or ted. i could not remember. well, thank god that you are staying in london. it coujld be worse.

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