Grey Clouds Comments
The grey clouds are heavy enough to be my covers and as I pull them over me to hide from it all I feel all consumed.
I hide from;
noise
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4. First of all, the lists just do not work. The items in them are too general, if not complete abstractions. It is to poetry what clip art is to painting. (The second list isn't even accurate. Those aren't urges, those are *objects* of urges.) The other parts are concrete and they do work. Work around them.
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9/11/2025 7:22:28 PM # 1.0.0
I think I get it but, I also think it needs someway to connect with the reader more.