Gremlin Comments

Nicely built. I didn't get it until the end. That's a twisty, turney, surprise kinda ending for me! :) DC

i love this, Wolfey.Enjoyed reading this..

what a tranquil piece. I love your words and the way you display them so beautifully. another fabulous tale.

I knew it was a cat. But the raised paw got me. Good write Greenie.

haha.........a cat! ! neat write

The paw did it for me! What a climax to such a lovable and enlightening poem. The conversation between you both had great depth in all its enchantment. So very well done...Karin Anderson

I am sad... so fluent so nice and so much love! yes i can think that you really conversated with her. so super work, or so super description of your feelings...... brilliant! !

Lucky you are to have an afterlife experience with your cat.They come back to check on the people they loved so much in their life times.My shaggy mutt Jasmine and my collie, Lad came back to visit me on different occassions.Have you ever read The Rainbow Bridge which was written anonymously by an animal shelter person? It's about the Otherside of life....I plan to write about my psychic experiences someday probably in short story form or rather wordy poems-I'm not sure yet what my Muse has up her sleeves. I enjoyed your poetry...very inspiring.

hhmmm you have tricked me there in the end.......I wondered why paws and there at the end you have said. Well written opus Wolfy...i liked this alot...new treat for me in crisp! ! ! 10++++++++++++

Pussycat smiled- Perhaps him willed - Gremlin after - Green line of tear... --------- All best.

another great one, my friend. really thought it was a woman, not a cat!