Wednesday, November 4, 2009

Greiving Suicide Comments

Rating: 5.0

One normal day he just died
He left a note in his hand
To his first love
Who was me
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Monica Rose
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If this really happened, I'm so sorry you had to witness something like that. This poem alone makes me wanna cry. I can't imagine how bad it could have made you feel. I like how you don't hold back, and you just let everything out.

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Allan O 07 November 2009

i'll just leave this to my thoughts upon the short story...thanks again ~^..^

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Tiffny Rhodius 05 November 2009

WOW! That was so intense, so heartfelt. Can such sadness be beautiful?

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Steven Aragon 05 November 2009

That was INTENSE. A wonderful heartfelt story. Def my fav. so far...let's see what else is out there.

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Dylan Oppedahl 04 November 2009

Its a very sad story and i think you should consider making it into a full length story if you havent already. If you do post it, please

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