One normal day he just died
He left a note in his hand
To his first love
Who was me
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i'll just leave this to my thoughts upon the short story...thanks again ~^..^
WOW! That was so intense, so heartfelt. Can such sadness be beautiful?
That was INTENSE. A wonderful heartfelt story. Def my fav. so far...let's see what else is out there.
Its a very sad story and i think you should consider making it into a full length story if you havent already. If you do post it, please
If this really happened, I'm so sorry you had to witness something like that. This poem alone makes me wanna cry. I can't imagine how bad it could have made you feel. I like how you don't hold back, and you just let everything out.