Thursday, November 26, 2015

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Rating: 3.5

Blow the Gong
Alarm the people
They must rise to see the shining sun
He is here travelling the dark
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Randhir Kaur 13 May 2016

They must rise to see the shining sun They must wake up to see them singing.... Beautiful... well written..

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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 08 December 2015

Verily, a lovely poem on the lovely season

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Manonton Dalan 26 November 2015

a very happy spring...truly is (I could skip winter if I may) .

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Bakuli Bhakali 26 November 2015

ya... spring is full of life whereas winter is cold. thanks for reading my poem

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