Wednesday, December 31, 2014

Greet The New Day! Comments

Rating: 5.0

In the Eastern sky spreads an orange tint
The many armed deity parts the shroud of mist
Awakening the drowsy, dreaming Earth
Inviting all to start the New Year in zest
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Valsa George
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Kumarmani Mahakul 09 April 2019

The orange shade has brightened into crimson glow Dazzling the wobbly pearls of silvery dew Flowers smile permeating sweet aroma They array in marvelous shapes and hue.....thrilling expression. The new year 2014 has come with a bright dawn as mentioned in these lines. Beautiful poem with nice penmanship.10

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Salini Nair 05 January 2015

Each morn glides down with promises new Each day holds for us experiences diverse.....................all prayers in a lovely poem....like it

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Soulful Heart 05 January 2015

Thank u valsa.................a great way to greet a new year and a glorious way to hope for a new beginning with the sunrise.......................golden beams of hope that transcend every gloomy hearts to burst forth into fresh vigour and energy..

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Akhtar Jawad 03 January 2015

A new light is flashed across the face of the Earth Promising a year ahead of joy and strife Let us roll up our sleeves and get ready for the combat Pledging ourselves to reap the harvest of life A nice write, let us hope the best.

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Hazel Durham 03 January 2015

Stunning write with very inspired lines about the new dawn of 2015 that we will look forward to a bright and promising new year!

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Geetha Jayakumar 03 January 2015

Wishing you too a Very Happy and Prosperous New Year 2015! A lovely picture of promising New Year. Let us welcome with all smiles...Loved it from your pen.

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Valerie Dohren 03 January 2015

A lovely poem Valsa expressing so much. With all good wishes for the New Year.

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Paul Sebastian 01 January 2015

Lovey inspirational poem exhorting everyone to look forward to year of greater abundance and achievements. Thank you!

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Daniel Brick 01 January 2015

That's a lovely photograph that captures the opening stanzas of the poem. I saved this poem for last because I knew it would be a New Year's poem. I'm typing this at 3pm New Year's Day so it is already 2015, and I barely am accustomed to writing 2014. One funny note. My birthday is in June, bur PH just aged me by six months by printing my age as of today as 68! Time is cruel and relentless enough without this mistake. I want my six months back! Time's winged chariot, indeed! Your poem is so filled with a sincere all embracing good will that I feel the glow inside me you must have felt in writing it. I am adding this to my list so that I can refer to it. And if 2015 brings me down OR rather if I let events bring me down, I will go back to this poem and say, VALSA ALREADY HAS BLESSED THIS YEAR AND YOU SHOULD BE BUILDING ON HER BLESSINGS NOT WALLOWING IN SELF PITY. DONT BE HARD HEARTED. OPEN YOUR HEART TO THE VISION SHE GAVE ALL US AT THE BEGINNING OF 2015 IN HER POEM GREET THE THE NEW DAY. OK START GREETING!

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Alesia Leach 01 January 2015

What an elegant poem. I loved reading. Favorite line, Each new day is a bounteous gift from God.

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Gangadharan Nair Pulingat 01 January 2015

The old year has bundled up and New year has born........Best of new year poems that I have read. great writings.

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Rajesh Thankappan 01 January 2015

The whole year may not be sunny as it looks to be Sometimes we might stumble and fall But do not hesitate, do not pause for long Onward and onward, let us march to our goal. This poem is as rich as diamond; reflecting the birth of a new year in all its splendor and glory. Besides that, I find it very inspiring and motivating. I should give this poem 100/10 but has to content myself with just 10.

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Saheb Mohapatra 01 January 2015

happy new year...............................this poem is great indeed................very poetical applaud of a new year............really liked it.

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Khalida Bano Ali 31 December 2014

Beautiful poem, Happy New Year.......................10

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Khalid Saifullah 31 December 2014

A beautiful poem. Wish you a Happy New Year......................10

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Rajnish Manga 31 December 2014

Poems such as these are the best bet to greet a promising new year. The morning scene created by you in the poem is by far the best I have ever read in my life. Following lines set the perfect tone: Let us welcome this first dawn of the year A fresh canvas to paint life in flashing hues

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 31 December 2014

A masterpiece indeed on this great composition of this poem at year's end.......Valsa......great write as always....10/10.........Wish you A Happy and Prosperous New Year 2015!

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