I was standing by the river
Gazing to the other side
The grass appeared much, greener there
The sun, much brighter, shined
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A marvellous piece of work Richard, this poem carries an important message we should try to heed. Best wishes, Andrew
It's better to travel hopefully than to arrive, Richard! I expect the subject of your poem enjoyed the contructing of the craft and then the boat trip! Nice lyrica piece!
I enjoyed this poem very much, a little bit of what is human in every one of us perfectly written. Regards Ann