Friday, February 29, 2008

Greener Grass Comments

Rating: 5.0

I was standing by the river
Gazing to the other side
The grass appeared much, greener there
The sun, much brighter, shined
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C R Clark
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Ann Beard 25 December 2008

I enjoyed this poem very much, a little bit of what is human in every one of us perfectly written. Regards Ann

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Andrew Blakemore 29 October 2008

A marvellous piece of work Richard, this poem carries an important message we should try to heed. Best wishes, Andrew

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 02 March 2008

sailing to a new brighter frontier, right on pal.

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Janice Windle 02 March 2008

It's better to travel hopefully than to arrive, Richard! I expect the subject of your poem enjoyed the contructing of the craft and then the boat trip! Nice lyrica piece!

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Nomi Mas 29 February 2008

like this one CR. in the same league as Frost! excellent.

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