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Great poem and imagery I love it! A ten from me and great work - have added it to my facebook too micron

Is this a literary composition that you have written or a picture-perfect painting that you have created? Enjoyed reading and visualizing both! ! ! Thanks for sharing.

it's like looking a nice picture and its frame.... nice poem!

Unique and witty. I love how you described nature as if having human characteristics. Very interesting. Thanks for the read.

Very artfully composed. An original mind is certainly at work here. An exceptional pen portrait for your gallery.

To me the first stanza of the poem is an unfulfilled state of nature, nature awaits alleviation of its thirst.But second stanza onwards a satiated condition is described, darkness melts, mirth is reflected on mirror, lily sates etc. and finally moon etches joy over speckles of ripples. Your vocabulary is well arrayed over exquisite description of nature. A condition of self attainment is also described, viz., “moment is me and mine as I conquer crown”.Your poems are mesmerizing.Much more than full marks.

To me the first stanza of the poem is an unfulfilled state of nature, nature awaits alleviation of its thirst.But second stanza onwards a satiated condition is described, darkness melts, mirth is reflected on mirror, lily sates etc. and finally moon etches joy over speckles of ripples. Your vocabulary is well arrayed over exquisite description of nature. A condition of self attainment is also described, viz., “moment is me and mine as I conquer crown”.Your poems are mesmesmerizing.Much more than full marks.

This is awesome. Loved the creational imagery and flow of the poem! Beautiful; D