Thursday, September 5, 2013

Green The Grasses Seem Comments

Rating: 5.0

If you like the lace and lateness,
Then prepare your bed in lust

If you crave a winding wooded trail,
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Susan Lacovara
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Loke Kok Yee 24 September 2015

Now my appetite is whetted, I'll read more of your poems-10

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Anthony Burkett 03 February 2014

These lines have a graceful gliding pace that is easy to walk beside... delighting the senses like a stroll down a country lane... as surprising as a stolen kiss... delightful!

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Ramesh Rai 10 November 2013

every question followed by a suitable answer. if you write such beautiful poem be prepared to read the comment. thnx for sharing.10/10

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Marcus Mckinley 05 September 2013

it seems that love has ventured for greener pastures only too dream of home. but, as fate would have it any trails leading back have already been overgrown. nicely written and full of imagery.

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Khairul Ahsan 05 September 2013

A wonderful poem! Straight talk. For no one gains free entrance, If not guided by the stars. Stars? ? ?

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