Thursday, September 3, 2020

Greensnake, White Snake Comments

Rating: 5.0

(Drawn from ancient Chinese myth)

The Green Snake coils itself
around itself. It is in total
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Daniel Brick
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Soran M. H 28 September 2020

flash and fascinate time upon time. My heart skips a beat. I am breathless. Nature is the beautiful background of our lives. Oh, pull it into the foreground!

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Glen Kappy 14 September 2020

Nature is the beautiful background of our lives. Oh, pull it into the foreground! This is cool, Daniel! Amen and amen to the imperative here. -Glen

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M Asim Nehal 03 September 2020

Welcome back after a long gap, I am active since August 2020 like you I took pause for a year and a half. Now back.

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M Asim Nehal 03 September 2020

Great myth nicely written, the metaphor used " Snake" to depict it was fantastic and use of imageries are fantastic, your poems are treat and thought for the mind and the soul. Brilliant 10++++++

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