Sunday, May 19, 2013

Green Signal Comments

Rating: 5.0

Shadow behind the door
Moved towards the fogged window
Leaving image of royal robe
Tug slowly in rusted chains.
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sekharan pookkat
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Geetha Jayakumar 14 August 2013

Beautiful poem. Very true love comes silently and slowly...loved reading it.

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Heather Wilkins 11 August 2013

a lovely dedication to poetheart. Moon waits for a signal a green signal from track always searching to fulfill real signs of care. nice write

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Hazel Durham 27 May 2013

A complex and beautiful dedication to poetheart with great lines!

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Nader Baheri 21 May 2013

beautiful.poetheart may praise this so do we all.~nb

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Valsa George 20 May 2013

A beautiful dedication! Coddle together With affection and tolerance Love come in real life Silently and slowly. Love the last stanza! !

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the first two stanzas are very dramatic and the followings are written using the breeze as the ink and hit the key board with the fluttering of the wings..Nice..Sekharan..

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Poetheart Morgan 19 May 2013

I thought i was too complex and inadequate. I still think, but your poem gave me the password to a better understanding of myself. I read, reread and i'll do it millions of times. Until, finally, I'll meet me entirely. Thanks Wise Poet.

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Payal Parande 19 May 2013

oh! how lovely she is my favorite poet too......beautiful dedication sir shows your real affection

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Unwritten Soul 19 May 2013

Ahhh....a dedication for Mirna! it really a soft and beautiful poem, and it suit to her as well..nice work! ! ! _Soul

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Gajanan Mishra 19 May 2013

love come in real life silently and slowly. true. I invite you to read my poems and comment.

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