Friday, March 27, 2015

Green & Red- The Flower Garden Is Dead Comments

Rating: 5.0

Jealousy buys the 'green-eyed monster' nothing
Left empty like an orphan of it's warm womb
Forever searching for greener pastures
And the fortunes of some long lost tombs.
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Theodora (Theo) Onken
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Theodora Onken 03 April 2015

Kelly, thank you so very, very much. So appreciate your taking the time to read my work.

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Theodora Onken 03 April 2015

Amiitava, Thank you and you are absolutely correct. It is a destructive emotion.

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Theodora Onken 03 April 2015

Patricia, thank you so much for your reading my poem. You are so appreciated.

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Kelly Kurt 03 April 2015

Your writing style and ability amaze me. Thank you for sharing.

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Amitava Sur 02 April 2015

Very true, jealousy begets nothing at last, though it tries a lot in wrongful ways.

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Patricia Grantham 27 March 2015

Never is anything ever gotten of jealousy. It is just a way of satisfying the soul with fleeting happiness. Nice.

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