Monday, February 2, 2009

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Rating: 5.0

goodness reasons to revel by reality
heart yet knows right path to heaven
eyes raves back by illusion of mirage
light refluxes into room of delusion
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Dr subhendu kar
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Obinna Eruchie 03 June 2009

a deeply thought provoking poem, good poetry.

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Randy Hogan 20 February 2009

I read this poem a think....really how deep is your soul... since space is a bubble.....and not infinite...at lest not our plan, maybe our soul is so large we have to fold it..to fit into cosmos. but still remain in GODs hands........ A moving poem so well done.....................

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Alicia Maestri 20 February 2009

Much better, reaching into your soul, looking for answers to real questions, i liked it alot.

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If all in life is an illusion then what is real? Truth is in the eye of the beholder but do each of us see it the same way? I gave you another ten.Very thought provoking poem.thank you...

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Maria Barbara Korynt 18 February 2009

Very much nicely written. Excellent workshop, is always recognizable :) before me they said so a lot, that here to add nothing - to take hold of nothing. I like it. I am greeting :) Maria Barbara Korynt

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now this is good poetry. Great read, great imagery... perfect piece

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Ramesh T A 11 February 2009

It alludes to the good old theme - clash between reason and passion. It is old wine in another bottle for me, friend!

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Reihaneh Jalalian 10 February 2009

very cool. and the title was very nice thanks for sharing 10

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Sreelekha Premjit 10 February 2009

This is absolutely beautiful....I turn green with envy..

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Rinzu Susan Rajan 09 February 2009

RAVISHING STUFF...FRESH GREEN CRISP POETRY...... : D

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Lynda Robson 09 February 2009

Beautifully crafted poem, thanks, 10 Lynda xx

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Michael P. Johnson 08 February 2009

This! My dear friend is beautiful.......a sheer delight

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Chitra - 08 February 2009

phrases of poetic eloquence...a beautifully crafted poem

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Reshma Ramesh 08 February 2009

wow! ! and the mystery of the way u write............? beautifully penned

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Ruby Heart 07 February 2009

yes, that is a bit mystery. good on writing the words togather to make a peace. very nice!

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Candace Quinton 07 February 2009

good job keep it up the writing

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Alison Cassidy 07 February 2009

Your poetry makes sense, even when it is difficult to understand. You use words uniquely, poetically and spiritually. The result is always surprising, always worthwhile. Your green of wild excites and delights. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Catrina Heart 07 February 2009

a fabulous composition sir...a mind creeping poem...Free will tells us what is the right thing to do with the guidance of the heart to have a loving and comforting move to way up us in heaven.....great! ...10+++

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Moushumi moushumi 07 February 2009

It splendors my mind to reach with my ownself & be with myself & live with my eyes charmed with thoughts of divine grace.10+

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Vaibhav Pandey 07 February 2009

awesome poem sir......just excellent. 10

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