goodness reasons to revel by reality
heart yet knows right path to heaven
eyes raves back by illusion of mirage
light refluxes into room of delusion
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I read this poem a think....really how deep is your soul... since space is a bubble.....and not infinite...at lest not our plan, maybe our soul is so large we have to fold it..to fit into cosmos. but still remain in GODs hands........ A moving poem so well done.....................
Much better, reaching into your soul, looking for answers to real questions, i liked it alot.
If all in life is an illusion then what is real? Truth is in the eye of the beholder but do each of us see it the same way? I gave you another ten.Very thought provoking poem.thank you...
Very much nicely written. Excellent workshop, is always recognizable :) before me they said so a lot, that here to add nothing - to take hold of nothing. I like it. I am greeting :) Maria Barbara Korynt
now this is good poetry. Great read, great imagery... perfect piece
It alludes to the good old theme - clash between reason and passion. It is old wine in another bottle for me, friend!
very cool. and the title was very nice thanks for sharing 10
This is absolutely beautiful....I turn green with envy..
This! My dear friend is beautiful.......a sheer delight
wow! ! and the mystery of the way u write............? beautifully penned
yes, that is a bit mystery. good on writing the words togather to make a peace. very nice!
Your poetry makes sense, even when it is difficult to understand. You use words uniquely, poetically and spiritually. The result is always surprising, always worthwhile. Your green of wild excites and delights. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
a fabulous composition sir...a mind creeping poem...Free will tells us what is the right thing to do with the guidance of the heart to have a loving and comforting move to way up us in heaven.....great! ...10+++
It splendors my mind to reach with my ownself & be with myself & live with my eyes charmed with thoughts of divine grace.10+
a deeply thought provoking poem, good poetry.